Hi All sportgfx Members ...
I will put my Renders cut in this topic
I will begin by respond below ..
please if you like it add your thanks and reps ..
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Hi All sportgfx Members ...
I will put my Renders cut in this topic
I will begin by respond below ..
please if you like it add your thanks and reps ..
-OneCon, GoldenRikiSig
top of his head?
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-OneCon, GoldenRikiSig
not bad render for your first ever render, but you need improvements mate.
the body needs to be alot smoother, take more time with your cutting.
do you use the pen tool? if not change to that. i know it's hard but use tuts and you will get the hang of it in the end.
i cant really comment on the hair here, as theres that bit around his head? what is that may i ask buddy? that needs deleting. but KUTGW!
i think for a first render this is bad i think you need to smooth your edges and delete the blurry mess on his head also use bigger and better quality images for better render kiu and keep trying
I deleted that ... i don't know
http://i35.tinypic.com/11lii48.png
thx exotic for the reply![]()
Last edited by Golden Riki; 09-20-2009 at 11:44 AM.
-OneCon, GoldenRikiSig
a lot better
but some parts of the body and hair can still improved alot also
you saved the render on white background :S
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Edit Again
Sorry for the white BG![]()
-OneCon, GoldenRikiSig
needs improvements mate, body isnt smooth enough i see lots of black outlines. background left behind. work harder with the detail around the body. head isnt very good either needs to be smoother. KIU!
not bad render
but still theres many parts of the body and head that can improved
are you using pen tool ?
yes
-OneCon, GoldenRikiSig
It's ok, the body is smooth, but the hair need more details tbh!
kiu
thanks Khalil![]()
-OneCon, GoldenRikiSig
not bad render but body needs improvements and hair looks unrealistic try to use normal smudge tool 1px
i can see some parts of the background near the arms still. hair isnt bad but needs more details. kiu![]()
Nothing :S
Last edited by Golden Riki; 11-15-2009 at 06:16 PM.
-OneCon, GoldenRikiSig
cuts are alright
eto'o one is a bit jagged but its pretty good
Kaka one is good too again jagged and the hair needs work
kiu
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nice renders dude
Thanks Iris, Thanks mate ,
More plz ?!
-OneCon, GoldenRikiSig
They are ok, but both of them need more work, bodies have some sharp and uncutted places, hair on kaka needs more detail as well as eto'o
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