Originally Posted by _Beck

after 3 tries, I get a nice result \o/

The BG Looks Ok Mate...But I Think It's A Bit Plain...And You Should Add Some Lighting...To The BG...
The Render Effects Looks Ok...Blending Can Be Improved Imo...The Textures Around It Look Kind Of Messy .. Remove Some Of These....And Lighten Up The Render A Little...
The Text Looks Fine Imo...Keep Working Mate...

Good signature.

The effects loooks fit, and the colours are fit.
Nakamura font is nice, and colour is good, the shunsuke font is good too, but the colour is a bit to bright. Think you should put the _beck... text in one of the corners.
Background is okay, but too dark, light it up in some places.

Good sig keep it up.

nani and .mufc, thanks for the comment
I puted a bit more lighting on render and bg
v2:

attractive the sign in the complex one I would improve the position of the render and the bg that is too void

In my opinion the render work looks overdone mate and kinda busy, the backqround is ok and the text is fine keep practicinq mate.

The bg looks fine. Its simple and nice. you can maybe work with the colors mate in the bg.
The render looks okay, but its maybe overdone as mauro said.
The text looks fine.

Keep working mate

Render effects are ok, but could need some more work. Blending could be much better. Bg seems kinda plain, try adding a stadium or something to it. Colors are ok, maybe a bit dark. Lightning is nice. Text could be improved. KIU!

V3

renders effect is nice
text is simple but nice
bg is simple...