the BG needs alot of work,,
the effects could be alot better,,
and the text is ok but could be better,,
try some tutorials and kiu,,

sorry mate the sig effects are too simple mate, the render effects are poor and the bg isnt very good either. the text could be alot better. keep practicing mate

The render needs some blendinq mate and also qive it some nice effects, the backqround needs more work and the text looks very simple, try some tutorials mate and stay active

The bg is okay. Its needs some more work.
The render looks okay, but it needs some effects.
The out glow looks bad.
The text is okay

The bg needs some work
The render looks to blurry
The effects aren't nice, can be better.
The text is okay.
Just follow some tuts