i dont like the effect on the bg a bit to shinny to the text will be nice with a darked background and some better render effect mate look at some tuts mate good luck

The backround is not good, try to keep it clean. Text need also alot of work and you have to blend the render in.

The BG is to busy and messy mate, try to keep your BG's simple and clear. That always looks better then such a busy BG. Text can be better, you can add more effects on the render. Check out tuts for that. Keep practicing!

Not good mate. The BG is way to busy and messy, try to keepe it clean and simple. The text is bad, also here keep it simple and try to blend it into your BG. The render looks normal, and it seems like it has no effects.

Keep practicing mate