Decent work mate but some parts need to be changed and improved. Some parts are too bright mate, fix that Render is over blended, remove those lights around and on him. Texture work needs improvement, try to apply textures little bit better mate BG doesn't look that good in my eyes, try something simple but effective. Text is out of place, find nice spot for it and add better effects. Keep practicing mate

Looks good mate.
The BG is nice. But add better textures. Tone down on the lighting. add better effects.
The render is ok. But is also to bright. Add better effects to it.
The texture work is ok. Nice textures used. But add better textures. Lighyting could be alot better
Text is ok. change the font and effects.
KIU mate

i personally think it looks out standing mate, very good work mate.. KIU

m8 that couldn't have been better!
Your text is good
Your effects are amazing!
Basically that we amazing just improve on the blur there's 2 much of it & the white soft brush is too much!