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sorry mate the effects are poor. the text is bad and the bg isnt very good. the render effects dont really work. and the render needs to be blended more. try some tuts and keep practicing mate

The effects on the render could be better mate, the textues could be better used and the backqround and text needs improvements, try some tutorials mate and stay active

The bg is okay. ITs kinda empty.
Work on the bg. MAke it interesting.
The lightning is bad.
The render effect is bad.
He is too bright in his face.
The text is okay.

Work with the render effects and the bg

Its a great attempt but not executed to the best, it could have potential. I think it looks oversharp? Work on the text and bg

Sorry, but your render effects are really poor, its just to oversharpened, positive is that i like the BG