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bg is too dark and text too,render is ok but i don't really like the brushes behind it.. keep trying

dont like the dark in your work

try to improve the text coloyrs

k i u

Tis ok but as sad before its far too dark
Its too dark to tell you what we think of bg and text but render looks poor

bg is too dark, maybe add some colors to it but i like the text render is ok but needs blending, and i don't like the brushes behind him..

text is nice but is to dark the render effects could be better, the brushing is nice, bg is too simple kiu mate

First of all the renders needs to be bigger although the effects aren't bad, the bg is too dark and plain, and needs some quality text in there, isn't a bad sig, but need some improvements.

keep trying

The bg is ok but the colours could be better. The text needs more work. The render is ok but too little. Check tutorials and keep practicing!